Great story in my opinion. Very good idea though somewhat sad regarding all aspects...
There's so much of the real me in this story that it's one of my favorites, at least the nostalia portion of it. I remember fondly the times where the sexual side of me was piqued as I grew into adulthood -- the first valentine, the first kiss, the first time a boy ventured up my leg.
And suddenly the story took a turn. Why do you suppose someone could hate someone for an entire lifetime without real cause? I wanted to explore that. It felt right for there to be some justification, or revenge if you will. There's a feeling of sweetness with revenge, but I can't help wondering at what cost.
I hope this kid gets a break in the future. I am somewhat twisted as I felt Kim got what she deserved? Oh well paybacks can be tough. Thanks for a very good story.
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