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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/22/14

very nice lighthearted feeling!

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by Maria239401/22/14

agreed!

a lighthearted feel to this poem. I have always enjoyed your work :)

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by JWren10/06/14

Long lines so suitable to deliver the message: light and casual, befitting the subject.

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