All Comments on 'Occupied Minds'

by Scheherazade88

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Fucked Up

doesn't make any sense to me at all, too much ambiquity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This is a good story about forbidden sex between two peoples at war with each other. It's very appealing that enemies find common interests in bed, or the bathroom in the case of this story. The story could have been improved by showing the obstacles to sex between Arab and Israeli. Some editing would have been helpful as it appears as if the writer's mother tongue is not English.

Overall, worth reading.

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