...the "we" you speak of is you, the author and me, the reader. Interesting premise but off-putting for a few paragraphs. Other than that, a well written story.
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...the "we" you speak of is you, the author and me, the reader. Interesting premise but off-putting for a few paragraphs. Other than that, a well written story.
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