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by Anonymous

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by chytown01/29/14

You Forgot*

The story.

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by Anonymous01/29/14

Yes you did forget

There is no story-shouldn't had submitted this one at all

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by ariesgirl01/29/14

The point of the story is that both are cheaters? Obviously she is, we have no concrete proof that Drake is other then him working late and lack of sex with her.

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by Anonymous01/29/14

One star...

...for decent grammar and spelling. Because there's no half-star option.

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by Anonymous01/30/14

Sorry!

You need more life experiences. Note; it WAS Saturday night, ie in the past. Drake's phone RINGS.... ie in the present. Make the tenses consistent.

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