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by Ashesh901/26/14

Forced

Anal invasion : 5-ed !!

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by Tsotha01/30/14

I'm not much for rhyming, but this didn't feel forced. Interesting subject. ;)

Of all, I liked these lines best:

"an example in the art of persuasion
as her body tries to fight the invasion"

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by painful_rapture01/30/14

Tsotha

Thank you for all of the thoughtful comments

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