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by kriss491201/28/14

Suoer Story

Great story well written and told hope there is more

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by Anonymous01/28/14

Please add more emotio

This is a great start but it is sort of a 'then x happened, then y happened, then z happened' story. If you add a little more dialog or even internal dialog it will help smooth it out.

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