Fairly transparent white Southern male fantasy--Kate stands in for the black woman the white Southern man desires but is intimidated by. The age difference stands in for the taboo aspect of that coupling. You need only to note the repeated description of Kate to see right through to the core story here. The usual standard fare really.
If you think the story is standard and predictable, so be it. The repeated descriptions were to allow the story to be read without the other parts if the reader desired. I don't get the whole South thing though. You're wrong, so you just appear to be foolish.
To get it out of the way, anonymous, if you don't like the man's writing, don't read it. I also fail to see how, in a story where everyone is ethnically similar it is about race. My parents had a similar age difference and they are from the other side of the planet. If you think inter generational (or even inter racial) attraction is limited to the southern USA, your planet is too small. Get out and see more of the world.
To Swilly, a nicely written story about two people who find each other. Keep writing and ignore the trolls.
Great story! The writing is tight and flows nicely. The story is realistic and shows promise. I'd like to see a little conflict tossed in somewhere, perhaps something about Kate doing something to find an interest that isn't one of Bill's???? Meeting his friends, her friends, family??? It's too easy so far lol shake it up a bit!!
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this!
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Anonymous10/09/14
MORE of this story
I enjoyed it. that is what this is about isn't it? a story to enjoy. why would anyone be critical of a nice, flowing story that is fun, adventurous, and loving? yeesh. and this is a different anonymous.
It wasn't linked to the first two parts, but it's there. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
by
Anonymous01/25/16
Best one!
This has got to be the best set of character personalities in the whole web site. It was so fucking good! I mean Kate was mature and lady like and realistic. Not one of those slutty girls that go "oohh daddy please fuck me" blech... The personalities authors make are like posers and whores. Its not even realistic . But Kate was amazing. Intelligent and. Mature. Even Bill! He was like a real mature guy. The character personality was perfection. Honestly I've been reading lots of these and THIS IS the best! Love it! I hope there is a next chapter! And more to come so please continue!
English
This is seriously hot!
There probably aren't many guys 35 and over who haven't had a fantasy like this. Your work is excellent. Please keep writing!
Hope the next chapter is posted soon
Keep up the good work
Final chapter is up
It's actually titled "Bill and Kate Conclusion". I've sent Laurel a PM asking that the stories be connected.
And thank you
to my readers for your feedback!
Standard
Fairly transparent white Southern male fantasy--Kate stands in for the black woman the white Southern man desires but is intimidated by. The age difference stands in for the taboo aspect of that coupling. You need only to note the repeated description of Kate to see right through to the core story here. The usual standard fare really.
Lol anon
If you think the story is standard and predictable, so be it. The repeated descriptions were to allow the story to be read without the other parts if the reader desired. I don't get the whole South thing though. You're wrong, so you just appear to be foolish.
Ignore criticism from trolls.
To get it out of the way, anonymous, if you don't like the man's writing, don't read it. I also fail to see how, in a story where everyone is ethnically similar it is about race. My parents had a similar age difference and they are from the other side of the planet. If you think inter generational (or even inter racial) attraction is limited to the southern USA, your planet is too small. Get out and see more of the world.
To Swilly, a nicely written story about two people who find each other. Keep writing and ignore the trolls.
Lovely
Great story! The writing is tight and flows nicely. The story is realistic and shows promise. I'd like to see a little conflict tossed in somewhere, perhaps something about Kate doing something to find an interest that isn't one of Bill's???? Meeting his friends, her friends, family??? It's too easy so far lol shake it up a bit!!
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this!
MORE of this story
I enjoyed it. that is what this is about isn't it? a story to enjoy. why would anyone be critical of a nice, flowing story that is fun, adventurous, and loving? yeesh. and this is a different anonymous.
The story wrapped up
with a third part, Bill and Kate Conclusion.
http://www.literotica.com/s/bill-and-k ate-conclusion
It wasn't linked to the first two parts, but it's there. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Best one!
This has got to be the best set of character personalities in the whole web site. It was so fucking good! I mean Kate was mature and lady like and realistic. Not one of those slutty girls that go "oohh daddy please fuck me" blech... The personalities authors make are like posers and whores. Its not even realistic . But Kate was amazing. Intelligent and. Mature. Even Bill! He was like a real mature guy. The character personality was perfection. Honestly I've been reading lots of these and THIS IS the best! Love it! I hope there is a next chapter! And more to come so please continue!
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