Oliver's Story

Too unbelievable?

The anonymous reader found this too unbelievable.
Yeah a lot of it was--but wait a minute.! This is pornography. Good porn, and that doesn't have to be believable. Just hot, lowdown, cock-raising and stroke inducing like this story. That makes it 5 star.

Hey Bill... Haven't Forgotten About You...

...Things have just been nuts lately, and hard to write AND edit it seems. Anyway... I've read this story before. I know I have, the tentacles, the alien or whatever screwing (him/her), all of it. Except for the guy being a lotto winner... but the throwing on the jeans and going shopping (HELL Yeah! of course that's what I'd do first :)... yep, that was part of it too. Not that I have oddles of time, and it "could" just be a coincidence, but I'm going to find it again now, as its really gonna drive me crazy until I do.

what the actual fuck??

What the hell is your storyline.

Begin
Skip a lot
Something alien but thats it
Wake up and go shopping??
First human response. What the fuck i am a woman with breasts and a pussy.
Shopping of course. You become a woman and you buy a complete wardrobe first tie shopping.
Dildo. Questionable.
You go out with the dildo in your cunt walking on 5 inch heels without panties. Even normal woman can't do that.
Then in the elevator and you jumps the first guy you see?
Then the fuck. Describe more, make it longer. You make it a guy. You fuck, you come and you go sleep.
The whole story sucks!!!