Thank you. That was so much fun. Loved the banter in between the serious love and lust interactions. And the ending was a good twist. Impressive what you managed to do with just one page. Good luck in the contest.
That twist at the end put some weight into the story that's usually missing here. I wouldn't go so far as to call it a moral, but it was at least a hint of one.
That was a fun read. I loved it.
fun story with an interesting twist. would have been nicer with more detail and maybe some kind of backstory for whoever was shooting the arrow and the couple too.
please check out my stories and rate and leave feedback if you have time.
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