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by Tsotha01/23/14

Very visceral, as I've come to expect after reading your last two. Again that directness... I'd like to see you mix both sides in the same text. The wild and the sub.

Though, in a sense, your directness is a bit of that already. It's like *slap* "listen here! This is my message!" :)

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by bethanie15501/23/14

I suppose my directness could be considered a virtue and a flaw. :)

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by Koba01/24/14

Hmmmmm....poetry that bleeds the true submissive mindset! Very good! "Bite me until I bleed". Yes.

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