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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/28/14

Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

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by A_Jerotica696901/31/14

not sure

The story bounced around too much. Not sure if I liked it or not. Some was very good, but not laid out well. Just IMHO.

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by Anonymous02/12/14

Seems off.

Not that it is a bad story but it is missing key ideas. I know it is in erotic couplings but it lacks character development. To say it is cliche would be an understatement.

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