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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years ago
Painful'raptor : this is painfully

shocking !?! you do Not have to put up with this & as a Poem this conveys your angst , anguish , sheer terror !

painful_rapturepainful_raptureabout 10 years agoAuthor
Ashesh9

I'm pretty sure a raptor is a bird, which is far from rapture, lol.

As for how I felt while writing this, it's just make believe, so don't worry :)

I just watch too much television, and this is a mish-mash of shows I've watched mixed up into a poem. I'm actually a very happy person. Thank you for reading my poems and commenting on them, I really do appreciate it,

<3

painful_rapture

TsothaTsothaabout 10 years ago

"i still love you even after this stops"

My thought: impossible!

"at a girl you made up and never really had"

My thought: Oh, ok. Now it makes sense. :-)

ch3mical_r3nt_boych3mical_r3nt_boyalmost 9 years ago
the crazy keeps getting ratcheted up

What a fun ride this poem was. We start off having beer and end up tied to a tree with blood dripping down the bark. bravo!

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