All Comments on 'The Down Low'

Thank you for sharing this awesome story. Will you continue it? How does Shawna react? Did she know already? Or does she rip him a new one?

Great passion! There's nothing hotter than a big uncut black root probing a pink pucker for pleasure. A good hard fuck from a big-balled horned up black dude brings you to the highest heaven.

I enjoyed that.

Would be interesting to see how things went when they moved

one of the times where the story is quick without coming out as fast-paced, romantic without being over cheesy, where the characters just blend into the reader without the writer having to give their life histories. except for some few mix-ups in tenses the story is a masterpiece.

I had a hard time following with the dialogue. I had to go back a reread it to know who said what to whom.

Liked the way this went...that he is going with him...that they will be a couple!! Tough on the kids that thought him a father though.

even with the things unsaid this came across as a tale of genuine if unexpected love. A little extra effort with the spelling, grammar and line shifts would have eased the reading, and I didn't get all the slang, but the story could still be understood.

was so not expecting that! seriously hot. loved it. liked the humor moments too. hope you do well in the contest. if you have time please check out my story and leave some feedback. thanks!

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