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A GOOD CHRISTAIN UPBRINGING MAKED FOR A HUNGRY ADVENTURER
Nice beginning. Blind fold was a novel approach.
To be continued.
Don't you just hate that phrase ?
Don't let negative comments put you off, stick with it, your story has potential. xxx
Feedback
Thanks for the feedback! So far I've received a lot of positive feedback as well as a few negative ones.
I'm fine with negative comments, but if you're going to be rude then I at least expect you to post as yourself and not anonymous. Any anonymous comments that I think are rude will be removed.
Lastly, the "to be continued" just means that we've done more since this story and there will be more stories to come. I definitely think this story is complete just as it is.
Saw you post this on Tumblr
I saw you post this on your tumblr and had to come read it right away. I love the scenarios you do over there, and this story is really hot! Thanks, and I hope to see more from you soon.
Epically bad writing
Not a single original or clever thing here. And the characters were simply unlikeable. No fun to read. And "to be continued" means just that. There's supposedly more to come about this story. What? You run out of words? This mess got the low score it deserved.
Love it!!
I loved it and thought it was a great story. Keep writing more please!! You've got my baby batter churning!!
Happy wife
I love being a slut for my husband. We talked about sharing and I told Chas. I would do anything he wanted. My name is Connie and I willing to do anything it takes. I have showed my body to our friends. I have danced naked on stage and had sex with all kind of friends and strangers. i have had one man at a time or a group of them. I like being a slut and whore. Have your husband share you with friends and co-workers. Show off your sucking and fucking.and show body off. Go around house naked and let all see.
Body Love?
If you say stuff to diminish your figure you cant say you love your body, i hate when someone says that stuff, i love my body of all the flaws it has. you need to get in therapy and look at your body nude and say only positive things everyday and in stories describe only the positive or put a positive spin on the things you are not happy about like '200 lbs gross jiggly cellulite ass' become 'thick big beautiful round plump ass' don't make your characters off putting and it works with relationships too. i can love anyone and that is a blessing i wish everyone could find
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I have read both your stories...they are excellent. Do us all a favor, continue writing and please share some with us here.
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