My Best Friend's Mother

You made this seem like she set this up. No story development just wham bam thank you ma'm sort of thing. Look at other stories on this site and you see some quality.

What's that?

"That was the best sex I have ever had," Janet said. What? In the back of a truck down a country road on a rainy night. You've had a shitty love life woman.

A "muscle" car??

With a back seat??
One big enough for two adults, let alone big enough for those two adults to have sex in??

rain on the moon

I've never seen a full moon during a heavy storm. Not bad but needed more story development like already said.

Needs work

I enjoyed the story line, but it just wasn't all there. At the very least you can add some chapters to make up for this one's shortfalls.

It's not very literary

But it's more than just erotic. It's pure porn.
Hot cock-raising pornography bound to arouse your most prurient thoughts and deeds. And for that it gets a rousing 5 stars from me.

Great Story

Thank You! Hope more chapters follow soon.

Hot SEX!! ****

The must have been a Chevy SS if they were in the back seat. He would need that much room for 9 inches. LOL

I can't wait till

the police car pulls up behind them while they are asleep and puts on the spotlight and top flashers. while of course the dash cam is rolling.