All Comments on 'Take What You Want'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
what happened to the dog?

Just what the title asks.

BiotechGirlBiotechGirlover 9 years ago
Character development...and missing dog.

Nikki was wishing she could be more like the woman in the restaurant. Then she suddenly is so confident and in control that she flips the tables a dominant personality. Extremely unlikely. I also was distracted by the disappearance of the dog. I expected her to have to drop the dog off at her place, but he was just never mentioned.

menensiamenensiaalmost 7 years ago

Terrific story, strong female with a hint of danger - only read a couple of your works and look forward to reading more!

TheDreamGirlTheDreamGirlover 6 years ago
Tables Turned

I loved that she took him by surprise!

Just 1 question: did she take him in when she straddled him and then when he flipped her onto her back, he came out of her, put on the condom and then sheathed himself in her again? it wasn't really clear

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