All Comments on 'The Mist of Time Ch. 22-Epilogue'

Thank you for sharing such a great story with us. I enjoyed reading every chapter.

I look forward to your next work! I looked forward to every chapter as you can tell from the hour my few comments were posted.

Alan

I have enjoyed it all the way through. Congratulations on the successful conclusion.

A great story, great characters, thanks again.

Loved this story. Great ending to a great story.

Smile .. the ending could have been 3 more chapters longer as reading the story made my day brighten up ... Hoping there will be a sequel .. Be well

Thank you for a delightful story.

Thanks for the wonderful story. I really appreciate well written stories. The end made me feel good. I'll have to read more of your entries. I look forward to more from you.

Thanks again

I can only second the other

reader who commented on ABby and "mist" namely that i eagerly looked forward each morning to the next chapter.

thank you for sharing this story with us.

ds

I really enjoyed this story. It and Abby are your best stories!

Loved It. The interaction between Daniel and Tina added a welcome texture. Hopefully we will see another a story of this quality from you soon.

This is the first story of yours I have read. I'm starting Abby tomorrow.

While I can't say that the story was not properly ended, I can easily imagine an ending with the wedding at Dower house, catered by Emma & Gerry. They were two interesting characters about which more could be said. Preferable to ghosts to me.

Anonymous Andy

This was one of the better tales I have read in a very great while. I did enjoy the added extra little twist at the end, as well. Kudos to you.

Fuddpucker

I have read all your work and have yet to see a piece that was not delicious.

This connection between Victorian England and Modern Times is fascinating.

Thank you very much. It is a shame that you did not start writing earlier in life.

Have you thought of e-publishing three books, Mist, Abby and People, a collection?

Another beautifully told and engaging story. I looked forward to each chapter and will continue to look for new posts.

Thank you so much.

Thank you, K., for this delightful saga. I really enjoyed this!

I didn't think you could outdo Abbey.

But I believe you have paralled it both in quality and in originality.

Thank you again for the delightful trip,

SliperyRox

For another amazing glimpse into the past. I put aside my time today just to read it all at once. When I finished Abby I thought that you had stopped writing. It is an understatement to say that I am so pleased to read your work again.

K67, you certainly did it again. Creating another fabulous story. Well crafted and skillfully imagineered.

Thank you for sharing. For some reason, after 'Abby', I thought you had stopped writing. Abby was the best ever. I like the ending of 'Mist'. Good to mix in a little of the ethereal......

I rarely weep when reading...this is the second tale in my life to have so moved me - thank you!

Thank you for sharing such a delightful story

Tony NZ

I had my doubts that you could wrap it all together and bring it to a close but you did it with aplomb.

There are of course other stories just asking for their own time and space. The caterers, Brian, Tina, and of course what happens next with Rupert. Thank you for letting Lily rediscover her self worth.

I must admit personal association and enjoyment since some of my family lived in Braintree.

a big bow is needed to wrap around this series.

well done.

And what is so rare as a day in June;

Then, if ever, come perfect days;

Then Heaven tries the earth if it be in tune,

And over it softly her warm ear lays:

Whether we look, or whether we listen,

We hear life murmur, or see it glisten;...

James Russel Lowell

A most welcomed love story. Maturely written with solid vocabulary. Well researched historical context. Many warm, clever, surprises. Glamorous. Kindly give consideration to offering this story for a series with Amazon, PBS, Netflix, etc. Thank you for a wonderful read as enjoyable as Winston Graham's "Poldark" books..

Most of the main characters had well rounded and developed personalities, some of the grace note extras were slightly sketchy, but overall it was a compelling read. Absolutely hated and loathed to give it 5***** !

Thank you very much for this wonderful story. It has greatly improved my sullen mood today.

Enjoyed the first time and again today. Would love to see more from your wonderful pen and imagination.

I award this story 5 tissues.

excellent

Fascination twists at the end. I loved the Abby series, but I think this one is paced a little better and has just as strong character development. What a movie this story would make. Once again, well done!

A true story and not a vehicle used as an excuse to hang sex scenes on as so many American tales are. The reader who termed it a Five tissue story achieved a neat term of phrase to sum up my feelings exactly; well done.

Just discovered this lovely story recently. Enjoyed it immensely. Fun characters and heart warming retrospective look at Victorian and Edwardian upper crust life. thanks for a really engaging tale.

Just a brilliant story. Shame this author hasn't posted since 2014. If anyone knows what happened please post here.

Well done! I only wish mire chapters were available. Thank you!

Truly excellent story, I know you aren’t active any Kezza67, but many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

excellent series, dialogue, history lessons, characters, etc. thanks

Really, really loved this story!

Great! Thankyou

Absolutely awesome. A really gifted author.

A proper ending to a generational love story: "They all lived happily ever after lives". Nice twist at the library reveal. Glad to read the preceding comments. I was a bit distressed about their lack during the earliest postings, where one commented 7 years ago and again 2 years ago, with none in between. My thanks Kezza68 for an excellent story.

Anon56

A fantastic story drawing you in to all the characters, and an excellent surprise ending

What a talent! Wonderful, creative romance. Truly hope you return to publishing on this site.

Thank you.

G

Just reread this and it’s still a great story, on my second pass I have noticed that a couple of the characters are somewhat cliched, the ebullient Tina was more than a bit ott, as was Daniel at times, along with the fact that I’ve come across several Polish guys in recent years, none of whom click their heels together at any point, ladies present or no, lend the story a feel of it being a series of caricatures in places. On the good side the location for “Chetford” is less than an hour from me, as is Braintree, so this has more local flavour than you’d think, the description of the low hills, overgrown hedges etc is pretty much on target, Huddington’s however wouldn’t have gotten away with a scheme as described, farmers are a community here as they are everywhere in the world, they’d have known exactly who owned the land they farmed and wouldn’t have settled for dealing with an agent, especially one known to be shady.

Magnificent story! I love your Tina!

Loved it