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A Hard Days Shopping

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by Joscelyn2tg01/30/14

Ah... Shopping...

...My (2nd) favorite experience .... you describe my 1st most favorite shortly thereafter... . Descriptive actions to the max... just wish it was more of a story, and better descriptions of the characters(the who), what they were doing this for and maybe a shot at the why? As is, its more of a dream sequence isn't it? As such it very well written and the attention to de-"tail" shown thru. Thanks for sharing it as it is... now how about writing a whole story? Gave it 5 stars to get you going :)

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