That was a great story. K hope u continue with this. I'd love to see what happens between them.
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Anonymous01/29/14
Nicely done
But I'd have preferred more 'basic' foreplay before the excursion into anal. Kissing. Making out. Opening her blouse, undressing her, getting her aroused by him playing with her tits and pussy, having her play with his cock and balls and get so excited by it that she 'had' to blow him. Mutual oral-related orgasms even before any attempt at anal.
That was incredibly HOT HOT HOT...ALL about her ass...ummmmmm!!! How about Ch. 02?
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Anonymous01/30/14
Clinical
High marks for the quality of writing, but this story is devoid of emotional content. Instead of teaching her the rudiments of anal sex, which is pretty intimate, he just as well might have been teaching her yoga. The whole notion that a normal young women would outsource her sexual education to a stranger is foreign to me. Perhaps this is the logical outcome of the sexual revolution: no love, no romance, no emotional development, just inserting body parts together in an arid, clinical, non-judgmental way.
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Anonymous01/30/14
Loved it!
I can understand the previous post, regarding more foreplay, but.....if there is more to come that could be incorporated, in a more intimate way later on. For example, Chapter 2!!
The overuse of certain words really disrupted the flow for me, 'sex object' and 'anus' being just two of them. As an Anon commented, it seemed too clinical, not enough feeling. I liked parts of the dialogue but I didn't really enjoy the premise ('everyone' doing anal).
Good luck.
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Anonymous02/02/14
I liked the clinical
I thought the clinical part fit because with this particular girl, she would've bolted if he'd been calling things sex toys, etc. She was painfully shy to the point she couldn't take praise from her best friend without blushing. She would have doubted herself and run if that had happened. And clinical is fun!!!!!
I loved it. Really hot. Professional and intimate at the same time. And you have a good sense about a doctor's personality. I think the fit between these 2 professionals works. I can't say that I'd add anything. It's been a long time since I finished medical school, so there are ways of being I understand. Good job.
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Anonymous12/05/14
Sweet Story!
So well presented that it's almost vanilla! Congrats!
It makes me wonder if Dave is strictly an asshole buggerer, or if he doesn't mind buggering her other holes ass well... oops, I mean, as well. It looks like a budding relationship is starting though.
That was a great story. K hope u continue with this. I'd love to see what happens between them.
Nicely done
But I'd have preferred more 'basic' foreplay before the excursion into anal. Kissing. Making out. Opening her blouse, undressing her, getting her aroused by him playing with her tits and pussy, having her play with his cock and balls and get so excited by it that she 'had' to blow him. Mutual oral-related orgasms even before any attempt at anal.
WOW
That wax so very HOT.
I love anal and have had the pleasure of taking some cherries.
Great story, loved masturbating to it.
Steve
Incredibly HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was incredibly HOT HOT HOT...ALL about her ass...ummmmmm!!! How about Ch. 02?
Clinical
High marks for the quality of writing, but this story is devoid of emotional content. Instead of teaching her the rudiments of anal sex, which is pretty intimate, he just as well might have been teaching her yoga. The whole notion that a normal young women would outsource her sexual education to a stranger is foreign to me. Perhaps this is the logical outcome of the sexual revolution: no love, no romance, no emotional development, just inserting body parts together in an arid, clinical, non-judgmental way.
Loved it!
I can understand the previous post, regarding more foreplay, but.....if there is more to come that could be incorporated, in a more intimate way later on. For example, Chapter 2!!
Words
The overuse of certain words really disrupted the flow for me, 'sex object' and 'anus' being just two of them. As an Anon commented, it seemed too clinical, not enough feeling. I liked parts of the dialogue but I didn't really enjoy the premise ('everyone' doing anal).
Good luck.
I liked the clinical
I thought the clinical part fit because with this particular girl, she would've bolted if he'd been calling things sex toys, etc. She was painfully shy to the point she couldn't take praise from her best friend without blushing. She would have doubted herself and run if that had happened. And clinical is fun!!!!!
Wonderful
I found this to be quite fun. A very good mixture of the hesitancy, curiosity, clinical, and then two different releases. Quite enjoyable indeed.
I like the clinical aspect.
I think the awkwardness adds to the hotness. Fun story.
great story
I loved it. Really hot. Professional and intimate at the same time. And you have a good sense about a doctor's personality. I think the fit between these 2 professionals works. I can't say that I'd add anything. It's been a long time since I finished medical school, so there are ways of being I understand. Good job.
Sweet Story!
So well presented that it's almost vanilla! Congrats!
Wet Anal
It was so hot, and feeling her cum the way did reminded me of a different time. I would like to see more of these two together again.
Excellent Story
Thanks ....
Good story
Thanks
Excellent storyline!
Extremely well written and told with perfect flow and buildup! Very engaging characters that helped bring this enticing tale all together.
Playing doctor...
with girls was always a lot of fun. Unfortunately, we never made it to this stage of sex play, however. Damn! It could have been so much fun.
I enjoyed the story. Thanks for posting.
Very nice story.
It makes me wonder if Dave is strictly an asshole buggerer, or if he doesn't mind buggering her other holes ass well... oops, I mean, as well. It looks like a budding relationship is starting though.
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