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Neighborhood Dad Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/31/14

Superb

Can't wait until chapter 06!

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by Maximguy01/31/14

Outstanding.

This is really good. I love the internal conflict between repressed libido and trying to do the right thing. Please keep them coming, and please don't leave us without an ending if you run out of ideas! Thanks.

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by Anonymous01/31/14

Fun story

In situations like this, young women basically ignore older guy. One can get great views that do excite.Sometime it is difficult to control

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by Nebel81502/01/14

Good

Great story writing, you have me waiting for each new chapter

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by Anonymous02/01/14

I enjoy the build up. 5 chapters and no sex yet. Looking forward to what happens.

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by Anonymous02/02/14

Boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

There is build up and there is build up, you have exceeded what can reasonably be called build up. As one of your other readers suggested, waiting until chapter 906 for sex is a bit much. How about if you do something interesting by say chapter 100?

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You are about to

Lose me as a reader. Make the next chapter interesting or I am History!

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