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by Anonymous01/31/14

Excellent story

Nicely done!

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by Anonymous01/31/14

Terrible

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by Anonymous02/05/14

not enough detail

This story was way too short and lacked detail. It would have been better if it didn`t have so much he said, she said information in it too.

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by Anonymous02/07/14

nice try

I think it was a bit of wishful thinking . . a bold move on Zebs part it could have got him in some deep shit

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