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by mel_pomene01/31/14

I like it - you should write more!

Hello, PrivateMaster, and welcome to Literotica - and for this fine first chapter of a story I hope you will continue. You write well and I would love to see where this might go - please tell us - five stars.

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by 02/01/14

Intrigued

A great start. One that has me intrigued. I hope you continue:)

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by MissPlayPretty02/12/14

please don't stop....

I love the build up, the tension and the anticipation of what might happen next

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