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Secret of Witchcraft Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by A_Little_Show02/01/14

Should I reformat these chapters into fewer submissions?

As I write Chapter 6, I can't help wondering if it would be easier for everyone if I delete the individual chapters and post everything together as one long submission. Any thoughts?

Even if I leave the first 5 chapters as separate submissions, should I wait to post Chapter 6 until I can post it along with chapters 7,8,... ?

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by NW_bi_boy02/01/14

Longer would be more satisfying

The brevity of the submissions makes it hard to get into the story. IMHO your future readers will be more engrossed if you did the combine and (hoping) put out longer works as you moved forward.

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by menatv02/01/14

Format whichever way you desire

Granted, I also thought it was a bit on the brief side. But it still doesn't detract from the experience. If anything, it leaves me wanting for more. :)

I guess if you want my opinion, a story with about 2 pages is about ideal. But if you wish to make it either shorter or longer, it's still fine with me. Your stories are so good and erotic that I enjoy reading them no matter how long or short they are.

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by MrFoxwood02/04/14

It's good.

I prefer the shorter and more frequent submissions as they better suit my reading habit. Of course, how you present your story is entirely up to you but I see no problem for people to wait until more chapters are up before they begin reading if they prefer it so. This way we have a choice.

I also think the brevity of your chapters suits the style and character: she doesn't strike me as someone who would commit extended passages of prose to paper.

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