Okay, total fantasy, but it still moved too fast. He goes from worried, to first bj, to total cock whore waaay too quickly. Once he got to the house, you could have drawn out the entire scene. Nervous, reluctance, acceptance, enjoyment. Longer descriptions of each activity step. Even wankers want some details. Jake could have verbalized how and how long he's wanted this. Would have been a good place for so e dirty talk.
i know it is not perfect but i loved reading it. made me very hard which is the intent. write another one and this time slow it down and have the dad and son take their time. was a nice hot read.
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Anonymous02/01/14
nice
Does dad get to fuck him or what. More!!!
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Anonymous02/01/14
HOTTTTTTTT & SEX-CHARGED...!!!!!!!!!!!
DEFINETELY TELL US MORE..THE DIALOGUE BETWEEN THE TWO WAS TERRIFIC..AND HARD BONER MATERIAL FOR BOTH OUR SON AND HIS DAD..YES..SUPER-SEX CHARGED WOMAN/MOM HERE..WHO IS LUCKY TO HAVE HER OWN " JAKE/MICHAEL"..(24/44)..WHO NEVER FAIL TO MAKE ME GUSH WHEN THEY ARE INTO TOTAL ACTION..PLEASE TELL US MORE..AND MAKE IT EVEN MORE SEX CHARGED...AND LET US IN ON MORE PHYSICAL DESCRIPTIONS OF THE TWO FROM HEAD TO BIG MUSCLE BAREFEET..
This story made me make an account so I can keep up with updates! I cam so hard! Please give me more daddy~!
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Anonymous03/05/14
INCEST IS THE BEST
I loved the story very much, I never did it with my father, but My Older Brothers and I used to do it as much as we could. It all came to an end when I turned 21, then I found other Men to do this with. In School my Teachers and I did some cock sucking too, way awesome for me, and I bet for them too. I guess they thought I would turn them in for having sex with a student. I sure missed it a lot.
Wish my doctor would do that for me, I started sucking cock at an early age, my own to be correct, I could take the head and a little more into my mouth, how I loved to swallow my cum, still do in fact as I can not find a man to give me his. I sit here reading these stories and licking the pre cum off my cock, It will soon ejaculate with out me even touching it, then I lick the cum off my hand or in some cases my panties that I wear all the time, nice silky nylon panties, after I cum I take them off and suck that spot wishing it was someones cock. da.cd@frontier.com
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Anonymous11/14/14
daddy fuckbuddy
A great story.Every dad should be fucked by his son.I get fucked at least twice a week by my son.I love his huge cock up my ass
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Anonymous03/17/15
Aww yes
This story made me cum everywhere. It felt so good, grabbing and pulling my giant cock as I was reading this story. Imagining that I was Jake. Very nice story, very nice story indeed. 5 stars
Okay, total fantasy, but it still moved too fast. He goes from worried, to first bj, to total cock whore waaay too quickly. Once he got to the house, you could have drawn out the entire scene. Nervous, reluctance, acceptance, enjoyment. Longer descriptions of each activity step. Even wankers want some details. Jake could have verbalized how and how long he's wanted this. Would have been a good place for so e dirty talk.
story
i know it is not perfect but i loved reading it. made me very hard which is the intent. write another one and this time slow it down and have the dad and son take their time. was a nice hot read.
nice
Does dad get to fuck him or what. More!!!
HOTTTTTTTT & SEX-CHARGED...!!!!!!!!!!!
DEFINETELY TELL US MORE..THE DIALOGUE BETWEEN THE TWO WAS TERRIFIC..AND HARD BONER MATERIAL FOR BOTH OUR SON AND HIS DAD..YES..SUPER-SEX CHARGED WOMAN/MOM HERE..WHO IS LUCKY TO HAVE HER OWN " JAKE/MICHAEL"..(24/44)..WHO NEVER FAIL TO MAKE ME GUSH WHEN THEY ARE INTO TOTAL ACTION..PLEASE TELL US MORE..AND MAKE IT EVEN MORE SEX CHARGED...AND LET US IN ON MORE PHYSICAL DESCRIPTIONS OF THE TWO FROM HEAD TO BIG MUSCLE BAREFEET..
This story made me make an account so I can keep up with updates! I cam so hard! Please give me more daddy~!
INCEST IS THE BEST
I loved the story very much, I never did it with my father, but My Older Brothers and I used to do it as much as we could. It all came to an end when I turned 21, then I found other Men to do this with. In School my Teachers and I did some cock sucking too, way awesome for me, and I bet for them too. I guess they thought I would turn them in for having sex with a student. I sure missed it a lot.
Nice Doctor
Wish my doctor would do that for me, I started sucking cock at an early age, my own to be correct, I could take the head and a little more into my mouth, how I loved to swallow my cum, still do in fact as I can not find a man to give me his. I sit here reading these stories and licking the pre cum off my cock, It will soon ejaculate with out me even touching it, then I lick the cum off my hand or in some cases my panties that I wear all the time, nice silky nylon panties, after I cum I take them off and suck that spot wishing it was someones cock. da.cd@frontier.com
daddy fuckbuddy
A great story.Every dad should be fucked by his son.I get fucked at least twice a week by my son.I love his huge cock up my ass
Aww yes
This story made me cum everywhere. It felt so good, grabbing and pulling my giant cock as I was reading this story. Imagining that I was Jake. Very nice story, very nice story indeed. 5 stars
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