by eroslit
I just read "Jamie" and was completely turned on by it. Naturally, it got a "100" rating from me
...and beyond the shower. Eroslit finish the story and then me!
A risky situation to be sure. I would like to have seen more emphasis on the risky part. All of it could have been expanded with more detail and more imagined stuff especially on the 4 hour trip. Still, it is good stuff.