I just read "Jamie" and was completely turned on by it. Naturally, it got a "100" rating from me
...and beyond the shower. Eroslit finish the story and then me!
A risky situation to be sure. I would like to have seen more emphasis on the risky part. All of it could have been expanded with more detail and more imagined stuff especially on the 4 hour trip. Still, it is good stuff.
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I just read "Jamie" and was completely turned on by it. Naturally, it got a "100" rating from me
And you stopped here? Leaving me hanging about the shower..
...and beyond the shower. Eroslit finish the story and then me!
Hoping for page two...
A risky situation to be sure. I would like to have seen more emphasis on the risky part. All of it could have been expanded with more detail and more imagined stuff especially on the 4 hour trip. Still, it is good stuff.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Jaymie or
More submissions by eroslit.