All Comments on 'Loving Eyes'

This is hands down the best story I have read on this site. I look forward to any follow ups you may do with Jim!

Beautiful on so many levels!

Thanks for sharing.

Brilliant.

You definitely weave a skillful tale, sir. I enjoyed each and every word. I look forward to anything else you care to publish.

It is not easy comparing one story to another. That being stated, this story is so distinctly superior to the usual Lit fare as to require a separate category. Sir Galahad has written an instant Lit classic!

Bravo sir!

So CalCynic

This is a great story. Love to hear more. I hope you write a second .

I regret that I have given other stories five stars, because I cannot give this one a sixth.

truly a six-star story. In fact it was three or four stories. The work is awesome, and the erotic aspect great.

What a treasure! There are few enough stories on here that I enjoy reading through; fewer still where I find myself skimming the sex to read the plot! By no means a criticism of the love scenes, I simply wanted to be able to enjoy the story in its entirety before going to back to savor the steamy moments.

I have read and re-read many of your previous stories and feel sure that I will be re-reading this one in the not to distant future. I hope that you can contiue this story as I would like to see what happens with the various women he has become aware of, especially his fellow scrounger.

Really a nice bit of literature,good story line and really great content. One tiny gripe (and I may be wrong but I think not) if my old,old memory hasn't failed me it is not Captain Ohnaka,but rather Captain Okana.

If I'm in error some one please let me know !!!

Well done, like your other stories.

Boyd Percy

I like your attention to detail, but I checked a couple of places online. Your memory is playing you false. Captain Hondo Ohnaka is the pirate captain's name from "Star Wars: The Clone Wars."

This story gets better with age!

An interesting initial set-up, but the prose becomes rather purple and the Spanish isn't always accurate

Most excellent story; perhaps a sequel watching Jim & Nora's relationship unfold?

I agree, definitely sequel worthy! Not only future interactions with Nora, but also potentially with Fiona and Ximena... a return to Chicalo? taming the shrew Jayne? Any or all of these might be fun to right and definitely fun to read!