Christmas Parties Ch. 02

byWoody Woodwood©

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by Anonymous

by Atavist02/02/14

Cool

Really liking your stories, hope you keep it up.

by honey_licker112402/10/14

Proofread, PLEASE!

"Jimmy slid his there hand down to Jenny's bottom, to cup both cheeks, and her her tightly to him"

This part of a sentence makes absolutely no sense. I like stories of exhibitionist wives, but they are easier to read when written correctly.

by Lickideesplit02/10/14

Fashion show (for Non Erotic)

Well, the first Xmas party in THIS story was briefer than Sweetie's lingerie. The second party was a bit better, but this series reminds me of the narration at a fashion show. Sweetie may delight in 'wardrobe malfunctions' but I consider 'adventurous' to include 'midsection-fluids exchange' after the malfunction! AND, the only mention of a Hubby reaction is in the intro. Hubby acts like a good platonic friend...either get excited about her getting mauled, or get pissed, or get depressed!

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