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by lablover179503/11/14

Cute

This reminded me of all the times I went to the zoo. This was a very cute and sweet story. Check your grammar and keep all the tenses the same. I suggest reading the story aloud and see if it sounds right. In a couple places, the phrasing was awkward. Eventually you'll be an awesome writer. Fantastic start.

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