I'm from an island way to the north and this story made me crack up! Good job with some of your spelling of the dialect btw. Everytime I hear any lryics with 6:30 in them I'll think of this. Lol
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Anonymous02/13/14
island gal
This was a very sexy read.
I must say, you did quite well with throwing in the local drink, lingo and music. Well done. I was just in Barbados a week ago and already I want to go back :)
Being a white guy who never had the opportunity to make love to a black woman, well, it's nice to read your description here. You have a great way of making this sound real and not so contrived like many writers whose characters instantly leap into bed.
English
*****
Five.
Omg do a second lust filled chapter please
Loved it!
And loved what it did to me!
Hot Damn
That was so fuckin hot
lol!,
I'm from an island way to the north and this story made me crack up! Good job with some of your spelling of the dialect btw. Everytime I hear any lryics with 6:30 in them I'll think of this. Lol
island gal
This was a very sexy read.
I must say, you did quite well with throwing in the local drink, lingo and music. Well done. I was just in Barbados a week ago and already I want to go back :)
Loved it
Being a white guy who never had the opportunity to make love to a black woman, well, it's nice to read your description here. You have a great way of making this sound real and not so contrived like many writers whose characters instantly leap into bed.
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