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Surviving the Horde Ch. 01

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by Anonymous02/05/14

Good first chapter, should be in sci-fi.

This was really good! More action, less sex!!

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by chipmonk902/07/14

great

you should add more sex and action like jack fucks a big tity zombie.

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by hornyzombie02/09/14

Appreciate the feedback guys

This is my first erotic, or well my first story ever written, so i'm happy with the feedback. Thank you, I will keep writing.

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