This was a good story, but I think you need to sack the editor "Rather, she whole seen had me crazy" surely this should be "Rather, the whole scene had me crazy".
I do hope you continue with with a few more chapters.
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Anonymous02/05/14
Pretty good
Hope you will post another chapter about this
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Anonymous02/16/14
I must admit... i got excited when I seen your name in the new stories!! Glad to see you writing again!!
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Anonymous03/03/14
Excellent, Outstanding
Really liked this one. Realistic. Having been caught by my boss in a compromising position, I can identify somewhat, but nothing happened like this. He just fired me. But maybe if I'd blown him, well, it would have been different. Who cares, I didn't like the job and got a better one. But I am more careful where we, uh, cavort. This story was so hot that I had to do my b/f after reading....in my new office.
BTW, why is it that so many commenters talk abour grammer or sentence structure or other things like that. I like the stories, especially the mature and nonconsentual ones, gets me so hot. I'm not reading for correct use of the English language that's for sure.
Good Story
This was a good story, but I think you need to sack the editor "Rather, she whole seen had me crazy" surely this should be "Rather, the whole scene had me crazy".
I do hope you continue with with a few more chapters.
Pretty good
Hope you will post another chapter about this
I must admit... i got excited when I seen your name in the new stories!! Glad to see you writing again!!
Excellent, Outstanding
Really liked this one. Realistic. Having been caught by my boss in a compromising position, I can identify somewhat, but nothing happened like this. He just fired me. But maybe if I'd blown him, well, it would have been different. Who cares, I didn't like the job and got a better one. But I am more careful where we, uh, cavort. This story was so hot that I had to do my b/f after reading....in my new office.
BTW, why is it that so many commenters talk abour grammer or sentence structure or other things like that. I like the stories, especially the mature and nonconsentual ones, gets me so hot. I'm not reading for correct use of the English language that's for sure.
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