I Always Wanted To Be A Cop

Great start

This is off to a great start, Rick. Looking forward to the next installment.

I agree, the story is off to a good start, it is nicely paced and I am certainly looking forward to chapter two. Thank you.

Very good start

Hope neither of the girls die though

A great story...

I was happily reading your story... then Chapter one suddenly and most expectantly ended. I have to say though that I have thoroughly enjoyed what I've read so far and look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.

Dam cliffhangers

5stars looking forward to the rest

Compelling start

I am eager for more!

sympathethic condolances for proud yucks

to wanna be thief of tax payer dollars

Can't Wait

Don't wait too long for the next chapter - I just finished chapter 1 and I can't wait for the next one.

Nice Start

I'm very sad about what will happen next, but I see in advance how your character will have a happy ending. I've made a prediction now I want to see if I will be correct.

I ALWAYS WANTED TO BE A COP

VERY GOOD STORY AND I AM SURE NOTHING HAPPENS TO DILUTE THE TEMPO OR QUALITY OF THE STORY IN THE UP COMING CONTINUATION. Will await a good continuation early.

Great so far but lack of chapter 1 in the title does kinda suck. I do hope this tale differs from your previous work, where the wronged man always gets back togeather with the woman who cheated on him due to some unbelievible reconciliation circumstances, that appear out of nowhere.

Good Read****

Looking forward to next chapter or chapters. Thanks for sharing.

Good Start

It's a very good start but I reserve my rating to see if you finish what you started. One of my pet peeves is that authors don't complete their multiparty stories and leave us hanging. I hope to see more soon.

cop

IT is a wonderful story and non erotic. I enjoyed the explanations. Thank you.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

First aid...

One doesn't really swallow their tongue. But nice story.