Rest Stop

The best fantasy should have some plausibility. This has none.

Fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Fucking rubbish by A Wanker

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I liked it. Where's part 2?

bad bad and bad...

To fucking short. Limp noodle is harder then what my rock got. Totally waste of my time reading this. I can dream better crap than this.

do they parents know the kids are fucking?how long have they been doing it?it feels like we missed some of the story.if A WANKER is going to post that to every story here then stop reading.

agree 100%

with mafia_patriarch,
need some semblance of reality in it,parents gone, sis asleep, so he just starts wanking in van,won't get out to have a piss but wanking with sis next to him no probs

....enjoyed it with a chuckle!

Loved the way you caught the nature of two loving quirky parents...I can remember traveling like that...watching the two of them together...to bad I had a brother with me instead of a HOT sister. The sex was short, but you can make up for it with a chapter 2...and more!!!!!!!!!

Keep it coming awesome job

NA

You rushed the story made it seem like they had been having sex forever

the best thing you can do is DELETE

very poorly written an way too rushed, this should be chapter two of four and needs to be three times longer. no background or character development to tell if this was the first time or not and no end. if you write for yourself thats fine JUST DON'T POST IT. if you write for the readers start at the beginning and move forward. ALL stories need a beginning a middle and an end plus a GOOD EDITOR, all we got here was a sloppy middle.

rest stop

needs to have more fuckingCCEC