"Oh Charles," she sighed, "How skilfully your tongue flutters across my clitoris. I declare I am quite beside myself with passion. My peak is but moments away, and I entreat you to consummate our union by driving your magnificent weapon into your Mother's
What mom is saying to her 20 year old boy is, "just shove your big hard cock up your own mother's cunt and blow your hot young balls up the same warm wet hole you came out of." This is a really cute, original little vignette by a gifted writer of tales of hot motherfucking. Five stars, no question.
I enjoyed this so much,,it gives us the story in all it's sexual delights without the need to resort to the more banal and crude expressions used so frequently.
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Anonymous02/06/14
Only the English
I say, Jolly good old chap... This piece was SO erotic. It seemed to be written by an English lad at night under his bed covers with a flashlight. One who probably read too many girl love stories
This is a Damn Nice story,of a young man
and his quite attractive mum and how he
fancies her and wants her and is so bold
as to tell her his desires. Why could I not
have that kind of luck ? WHY?
English
"Oh Charles," she sighed, "How skilfully your tongue flutters across my clitoris. I declare I am quite beside myself with passion. My peak is but moments away, and I entreat you to consummate our union by driving your magnificent weapon into your Mother's
What mom is saying to her 20 year old boy is, "just shove your big hard cock up your own mother's cunt and blow your hot young balls up the same warm wet hole you came out of." This is a really cute, original little vignette by a gifted writer of tales of hot motherfucking. Five stars, no question.
Delightfull
I enjoyed this so much,,it gives us the story in all it's sexual delights without the need to resort to the more banal and crude expressions used so frequently.
Only the English
I say, Jolly good old chap... This piece was SO erotic. It seemed to be written by an English lad at night under his bed covers with a flashlight. One who probably read too many girl love stories
I'm afraid I can't respond how I want to here, for I lack the education to recall the right words to use.
Just know I found this very, very funny.
Victorian Style
Are you attempting to begin a companion volume to 'The Pearl'?
Salaciously charming and witty
Remarkably adroit Mr. rufriter. I enjoyed it immensely.
Well done
And very enjoyable to read!
You speak good English having been in this country such a long distance!
Ripping yarn!
Well done, old chap! Tom Jones (the original one) would be most proud!
Wonderful
Absolutely well done!
Thouroughly charming.
It brought a smile and made me chuckle.
Garbage
What utter trash, a total waste of time
great
Hahahaha. Nicely done bit of silliness
???????
What a load of crap !!!
Since you don't seem to be into long stories, I'll keep my comment brief:
I didn't care for it. Rushed, pretentious, rushed, unintentionally sardonic, and rushed.
Waiting patiently
for part two of "An Eye Opener For Tony"
One Word Rating.
PISH!
comment
It was 100% as advertised in the comments leading the story. Thank you!
Damn Nice
This is a Damn Nice story,of a young man
and his quite attractive mum and how he
fancies her and wants her and is so bold
as to tell her his desires. Why could I not
have that kind of luck ? WHY?
LMAO! Kudos.
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