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by TooCleverByHalf02/06/14

Short But Sweet

One of the shortest stories I've read that actually managed to have actual Romance in it. Well done!

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by gulshannray02/07/14

BEST LAID PLANS

GOOD READING BUT VERY SHORT. HOPE THE AUTHOR TO CONTINUE THE NEXT DAY'S SEQUENCE AS SHE LEFT SCOPE FOR CONTINUING THE STORY.

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