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Dancing for Money

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/06/14

intensely erotic

well done

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by MitchFraell02/06/14

Very good.

A good little extract that is complete in itself.

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by wawfer02/06/14

Love it

I really like the way this is written. the feeling of it is more intense because of the abstract way its presented. lol it is really good just with this, but I would definitely love to see more :D

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by Anonymous02/07/14

Wonderful

The story was everything it needed to be: hot, erotic, and teasing. I do hope you write more in the future, I would love to read it.

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by Anonymous07/08/14

Continue?

I need to know what happens next!

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