All Comments on 'A Breath Apart'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Poignant reading of a lover's breathing on her love's departure for the war.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Ever so...

A wife's sweet goodbye to her beautiful youthful soldier. The age old sorrow that never changes in intensity and sadness. Having been there this one rings my emotional bell.

Beautiful heartfelt rendering.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Beautiful words..

paint one of life's sad stories of a lover going to war..

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SINCE LACK OF BREATH IS #1 KILLER

we are all in the same situation. TK U MLJ LV NV

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