Wish my sister was that big of a cocksucking slut. Rose evidently likes rough sex. Skull fuck her and brutality fuck her ass over and over again. I'd never let her go and she could be my slut for as long as she wanted.
The first was that Bill accidentally met his sister, Rose at the hotel. The second was that Rose loved to give blow jobs and Bill enjoyed getting them. The third was that Rose delighted in having her pussy eaten. How many more coincidences could happen to these two?
I enjoyed your story and wish you good luck in the Valentine's Day contest.
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Anonymous02/06/14
Total rubbish
Never read anything so bad
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Anonymous02/06/14
more
I want more please write more and go more in depth with their story and wht he left and what that did to her. But please write more
As for the comment about getting a blowjob and not knowing it, he had been drinking and that does slow some things down and mess with the semi-conscious head that one has waking in the middle of the night.
The characters were very well done and I think another chapter might include a reunion with her friends included. Nasty/nice story 5 stars
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Anonymous02/07/14
Hot as hell
Justa need a little edit, it's kind a sweet. Hope you continue this, ther e's more to it.
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Anonymous02/07/14
Sequel
More please, what happens in Connecticut? Do any of her friends come back east and join in?
That was a great story but you could expand on it by explain what happened back in Connecticut. please!
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Anonymous02/22/14
Awesome
Great story! I think the realistic acceptance of knowing it won't last was a nice touch.
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Anonymous03/03/14
You had such a great buildup then WHAM, asking for sex with very little explination. A full page of teasing and tense thoughts before hand would have made this much better. Ending was rushed as well. 3.5/5.
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Anonymous04/20/14
what the fuck
you start off with a story that makes us wonder WHY it is in the incest area then ambush us with news he has a sister that you NEVER mentioned. the sex was rushed and uninspired the end leaves a lot to be desired. all in all no more than a one at best and probably lower if it was possible.
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Anonymous08/07/14
Terrible ending to a terrible beginning; how fitting.
A waste of time. Seriously, they should consider putting the comments at the very top of the first page so I know whether this story is utter garbage or not.
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Anonymous01/16/15
i liked it
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Anonymous07/29/15
Fantastic Story!
I love it! I'm not sure what the other commenters read but it certainly wasn't this very sexy story. I do hope you add another chapter or two so I can love those too!!
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Anonymous02/13/16
Well written
One thing I do know is that any brother and sister who fall in love will never split.These relationships are far stronger and more intense than any normal marriage or relationship.I have been with my sister as my wife for 40 years.We have been inseparable all our lives.We could not then and cannot now even bare to spend a night apart.If I go away on business she has to come too.We would always creep into each other's bed at night although nothing sexual ever took place.When it did I was nearly 18 and she 19,it was the most natural wonderful moment of our lives except the birth of our two healthy daughters.Mom knew for about 4 years but told her she must not tell me unless I told her how I felt. Dad was not so understanding he died ashamed of us which was very painful.We could never even think of spending time with other people and never bothered with boy or girlfriends.The sex is the result of the love and trust NOT the other way round.We have been called perverts mostly by family but these are the same people who cheated on their partners and ended up divorced or unhappy and hating each other.Sibling relationships are very common but never talked about.
cock loving slut...
Wish my sister was that big of a cocksucking slut. Rose evidently likes rough sex. Skull fuck her and brutality fuck her ass over and over again. I'd never let her go and she could be my slut for as long as she wanted.
Life is full of coincidences
The first was that Bill accidentally met his sister, Rose at the hotel. The second was that Rose loved to give blow jobs and Bill enjoyed getting them. The third was that Rose delighted in having her pussy eaten. How many more coincidences could happen to these two?
I enjoyed your story and wish you good luck in the Valentine's Day contest.
Total rubbish
Never read anything so bad
more
I want more please write more and go more in depth with their story and wht he left and what that did to her. But please write more
* * * * *
You have got to write Part 2! Hurry!
Liked it, please continue
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How does someone get a blowjob in their sleep and not know it?
re: "Total Rubbish" author is full of shit
Yet another asshole who can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion.
Awesome
As for the comment about getting a blowjob and not knowing it, he had been drinking and that does slow some things down and mess with the semi-conscious head that one has waking in the middle of the night.
The characters were very well done and I think another chapter might include a reunion with her friends included. Nasty/nice story 5 stars
Hot as hell
Justa need a little edit, it's kind a sweet. Hope you continue this, ther e's more to it.
Sequel
More please, what happens in Connecticut? Do any of her friends come back east and join in?
Next chapter?
I think you should write another chapter
Great story
You have a great story going on here that needs to be continued.
That was a great story but you could expand on it by explain what happened back in Connecticut. please!
Awesome
Great story! I think the realistic acceptance of knowing it won't last was a nice touch.
You had such a great buildup then WHAM, asking for sex with very little explination. A full page of teasing and tense thoughts before hand would have made this much better. Ending was rushed as well. 3.5/5.
what the fuck
you start off with a story that makes us wonder WHY it is in the incest area then ambush us with news he has a sister that you NEVER mentioned. the sex was rushed and uninspired the end leaves a lot to be desired. all in all no more than a one at best and probably lower if it was possible.
Terrible ending to a terrible beginning; how fitting.
A waste of time. Seriously, they should consider putting the comments at the very top of the first page so I know whether this story is utter garbage or not.
i liked it
Fantastic Story!
I love it! I'm not sure what the other commenters read but it certainly wasn't this very sexy story. I do hope you add another chapter or two so I can love those too!!
Well written
One thing I do know is that any brother and sister who fall in love will never split.These relationships are far stronger and more intense than any normal marriage or relationship.I have been with my sister as my wife for 40 years.We have been inseparable all our lives.We could not then and cannot now even bare to spend a night apart.If I go away on business she has to come too.We would always creep into each other's bed at night although nothing sexual ever took place.When it did I was nearly 18 and she 19,it was the most natural wonderful moment of our lives except the birth of our two healthy daughters.Mom knew for about 4 years but told her she must not tell me unless I told her how I felt. Dad was not so understanding he died ashamed of us which was very painful.We could never even think of spending time with other people and never bothered with boy or girlfriends.The sex is the result of the love and trust NOT the other way round.We have been called perverts mostly by family but these are the same people who cheated on their partners and ended up divorced or unhappy and hating each other.Sibling relationships are very common but never talked about.
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