All Comments on 'Harley Seduces the Teacher'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
yummy

hot damn~ i wish i could have done that to my teacher i had a huge crush on... 5 yrs after graduation we still speak maybe its time for me to make a move great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very...em... amiturish...

this just reeked of amiture schoolboy writing. there was no depth any the story didnt have a flow, it was like reading a step by step guide, not an evolving storyline... first this happened then this then this.... very bad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Brilliant, loved it.

Hot story, hot sex, hot student and hot teacher, all the perfect ingredients.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
So-so

It would have been good except for the characters names changing. At some parts the teacher was Amy and the student was Harley. At other parts the teacher was Harley and the student was Amy. That just causes confusion and doesn't add anything to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A Video....

Could it be in a video. these girls sound hot and when sucking her pussy it made me warm make it a video and i will love it these hot bitches really turned me on and can i get more so i can see what its really like!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Poo

This was really poorly written; Everything is so abrupt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Detail

this is terrible its needs way more detail

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

harley ireally want to fuck you and suck on your tits and eat your pussy until you cum

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
oh god

i really want to fuck my teacher...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Yummi

Harley, I'm waiting for you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
FUCK ME

mm i want to suck amys pussy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
meet up

i need u 2 on my pussy we can go three way

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
meet me

i love it and come meeet me at apples so we can go bac to my place and fuk each other

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fuckkk Yessss . ! <3

I love this story . in the middle of it i started rubbing my pussy . i was so wet . i came . can we get to know each other so then you can write my stories for me? i wish i could just fuck harley .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
that is soo good

i dont know if im a lesbain or bi ect but that turned me on , need to find me some pussy now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Pussy

Poorly written yes, but halfway through the story I reached down and flicked that bean so hard I orgasmed 3 times. I wish I knew a slut like Harley so that she could lick my wet cunt

gotranegotraneover 10 years ago
Very Nice!

Very nice story, I'd love to see a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Anon

Best story ever

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Hmmm

Yes, this is a good plot line, I love the hot teacher-hot student relationship. But this is very poorly written. It had not build up and there is very little detail. Good but not great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A bit to fast

Nice story but it seemed to me that the seduction should have taken longer. I think that it would have been better if these two girls found out that they were attracted to each other and slowly fell in love.instead of the slam bam way that you got them together.

I enjoy the slow seduction as much as the actual physical seduction.

Still a good story just not long enough

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