Husband to Wife

Huh ?!

What kind of story was that ??

With English as a second language, I'd suggest an editor.

Your storyline follows others I've read but your weak understanding of grammar and syntax makes the story stilted and difficult to follow. If you plan to continuing this story or develop others I encourage you to seek help from an good editor.

One character's name defines the whole story!

KSHITZ.

It's da SHITS alright!

Need a category for stupid Indian stories. I am so sick of you call center rejects putting stories on here that make no sense and is poor English grammar. C'mon retard if you want to write in English then take a year or two of English. I wouldn't write some sex story in Raghead Hindi if I couldn't make the reader understand. By the way last week I was in your 7-11 and you short changed me. Americans remember 9-11 and boycott the sand niggars 7-11