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by Oldbear6302/05/14

Leaves me wondering

Why would they whisper and taunt and are you waiting for the someday it will stop or you will get vengence. Nice job, dear Queen. Wanted to 5 it but hit 4 and it wont let me correct.

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by D_K_Moon02/05/14

NIce

For a short verse it carried a lot of punch. Very nicely written.

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by Queenelizabeth02/06/14

Old Bear

From the 'other' perspective. Course that might just leave you wondering more :) Thank you for the 5 that almost made it.

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by Queenelizabeth02/06/14

D_K_Moon

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. It's much appreciated.

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