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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/07/14

Great start!

Don't stop now. You have me interested and I want to see where this goes. I am a romantic at heart, so I'd like to see three chapters where these two ladies, ultimately, end up together. Thank you for submitting this!

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by Arago00702/09/14

Fun read...

5 stars for the last line alone :)
The story was cute, interesting and sexy, good job!

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by jclement02/10/14

More!

Great! Not bad as a stand-alone, but more would definitely be better!

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