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Girlfriend's Roommate Owns Me Ch. 01

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by goamz8602/08/14

not bad

Love the idea, but it was rushed. build up the tension a little especially since the girlfriend is right next to them. Look forward to the next chapter

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by Anonymous02/10/14

pretty good

I hope theres more explanation to why his girlfriend didnt wake up and what will happen next. Public places like at a group date in the bathroom, always a fun sex scene but just a random idea! Keep it up.

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