pls don't make the wife a cheater. that's way too typical and such a cop out justification for what he's doing. i almost rather he assume she's cheating or ashley fake the evidence that his wife is cheating than to have use manipulated into thinking his actions are okay.
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Anonymous02/09/14
Great Direction.
I love the way the story is unfolding and thought the wife was such a bitch anyway. I don't think he would be in a relationship with Ashley if the wife wasn't a bitch. Another 5* addition to your collection TMM.. Thanks..
Maybe it could be an amicable split since they both have needs that aren't being met at home? I like that actually.
Ashley is definitely wanting him on a permanent basis but how will her parents react if they come out? Should make for an interesting twist.
I don't think the wife would be into a threesome.LOL She seems far too straightlaced to even contemplate that and I hope that if they do bring in Lindsay, that it is obvious who he would prefer and who is number one to him.
I think Ashley is deeper than you are letting us see at this point and the little insights we get to her give us a more three dimensional character than a just a hot cheerleader.
I can't want to read the whole series!
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Anonymous02/09/14
Wife cheating devalues the naughtiness
If the wife is cheating, then his and Ashley's encounters almost become justified, and that really waters down the intensity and mental stimulation of the entire situation. The thing that made the affair so kinky was that Ashley was a determined seductress and the wife really wasn't a bad person. The best part of this story is the wrongness of it all.
Every time Ashley refers to the wife as "bitch" it's more wicked because we know the wife really isn't a bitch at all. If these pearls weren't of value to the wife, then it would be just another prop during sex. If the wife is really cheating, then the wife becomes a villain of sorts and all the naughty encounters become okay, just another typical fuck story. Please don't let this happen.
For the couple of readers that have mentioned the wife cheating all I can say is that the only evidence that would seem to exist was found by Ashley, who seems a bit hellbent on revenge. Maybe she is cheating, maybe she's not. That's what we need to find out as we go along!
Thanks for reading!
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Anonymous02/10/14
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Great series, I hope there are many more chapters to come.
Fucking lava hot!!! Go Ashley! Love that little brilliant slut and how layered she is! Not your little average teen Lolita!
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Anonymous02/12/14
Excellent series
Please continue. Dialog is intelligent. Description of the sex is great. Every middle-age man's fantasy. It's possible Ashley planted the ticket stub. Can't wait to find out who dunnit to whom.
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Anonymous02/12/14
So very hot!
I loved this tale. Good, descriptive writing, very erotic and evocative. The scenario is unbelievably hot! I wish I was this dude :-) I can't wait to read more and find out what happens...
On one hand, I don't like cheaters, of either sex, so this aspect of this series does not turn me on...however, we(and hubbie) now suspect that it's not all one sided, is it?
If it is the case, will he confront his wife, or sit down for an honest talk? would they "open" their marriage? Maybe a threesome with all the protagonists? Will someone get bitten on the ass?
On the other hand, the teen's revenge/seduction is an interesting twist by itself and makes me wonder where all this is going and how it will end...
Oy! All these questions!
Hey your living the dream." For a moment I felt like a dirty old man."
Then just as quick the moments gone. Just when I thought Brian was in the clear, you've thrown another obstical in his path. I'm thinking Ashley is one clever woman, Brian should be very careful not to leave her hanging. I feel like I'm on a thrill ride with this story.
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pls don't make the wife a cheater. that's way too typical and such a cop out justification for what he's doing. i almost rather he assume she's cheating or ashley fake the evidence that his wife is cheating than to have use manipulated into thinking his actions are okay.
Great Direction.
I love the way the story is unfolding and thought the wife was such a bitch anyway. I don't think he would be in a relationship with Ashley if the wife wasn't a bitch. Another 5* addition to your collection TMM.. Thanks..
Omg
You have me on the edge of my seat ! Great chapter looking forward to the next
I like the idea that he isn't the only one
Maybe it could be an amicable split since they both have needs that aren't being met at home? I like that actually.
Ashley is definitely wanting him on a permanent basis but how will her parents react if they come out? Should make for an interesting twist.
I don't think the wife would be into a threesome.LOL She seems far too straightlaced to even contemplate that and I hope that if they do bring in Lindsay, that it is obvious who he would prefer and who is number one to him.
I think Ashley is deeper than you are letting us see at this point and the little insights we get to her give us a more three dimensional character than a just a hot cheerleader.
I can't want to read the whole series!
Wife cheating devalues the naughtiness
If the wife is cheating, then his and Ashley's encounters almost become justified, and that really waters down the intensity and mental stimulation of the entire situation. The thing that made the affair so kinky was that Ashley was a determined seductress and the wife really wasn't a bad person. The best part of this story is the wrongness of it all.
Every time Ashley refers to the wife as "bitch" it's more wicked because we know the wife really isn't a bitch at all. If these pearls weren't of value to the wife, then it would be just another prop during sex. If the wife is really cheating, then the wife becomes a villain of sorts and all the naughty encounters become okay, just another typical fuck story. Please don't let this happen.
Thanks for the comments!
Thanks to everyone for the comments.
For the couple of readers that have mentioned the wife cheating all I can say is that the only evidence that would seem to exist was found by Ashley, who seems a bit hellbent on revenge. Maybe she is cheating, maybe she's not. That's what we need to find out as we go along!
Thanks for reading!
More
Great series, I hope there are many more chapters to come.
Oh I fucking love this so much!
Fucking lava hot!!! Go Ashley! Love that little brilliant slut and how layered she is! Not your little average teen Lolita!
Excellent series
Please continue. Dialog is intelligent. Description of the sex is great. Every middle-age man's fantasy. It's possible Ashley planted the ticket stub. Can't wait to find out who dunnit to whom.
So very hot!
I loved this tale. Good, descriptive writing, very erotic and evocative. The scenario is unbelievably hot! I wish I was this dude :-) I can't wait to read more and find out what happens...
I am ambivalent
On one hand, I don't like cheaters, of either sex, so this aspect of this series does not turn me on...however, we(and hubbie) now suspect that it's not all one sided, is it?
If it is the case, will he confront his wife, or sit down for an honest talk? would they "open" their marriage? Maybe a threesome with all the protagonists? Will someone get bitten on the ass?
On the other hand, the teen's revenge/seduction is an interesting twist by itself and makes me wonder where all this is going and how it will end...
Oy! All these questions!
now we know why she is so suspicious
she comes by it naturally. born out of her own behaviour.
Hey your living the dream." For a moment I felt like a dirty old man."
Then just as quick the moments gone. Just when I thought Brian was in the clear, you've thrown another obstical in his path. I'm thinking Ashley is one clever woman, Brian should be very careful not to leave her hanging. I feel like I'm on a thrill ride with this story.
Wasted days and wasted nights
And wasted time reading this garbage.
No ending
Gave a 3 out of charity
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