All Comments on 'Our Dirty Secret'

Wow, a very hot story. 5 stars.

Thanks for the five stars, and for being the first comment on my story, katestyle! I really appreciate it.

-TKO

Excellent scene-setting, pacing, and, of couse, the butt-fucking! Brava!! Looking forward to more of your stories.

Five stars

Great story. Really hot with enough verisimilitude to give a reader the "you are THERE!" feeling.

I look forward to more!

not much more to it than that, its naughty but realistic and totally hot.

I rarely read in this category, and 2nd person POV usually makes me groan in disappointment after a paragraph or less, but you really made it work. It felt immediate the whole way through, and there weren't any of the usage errors that distract from some of the hottest stories. Definitely 5 stars for a story that is both hot and well-written.

This one of some of the naughtiness I did when much younger and had a willing partner. Okay no anal in public, that is a bit much, but lots of sex in places that were semi-public and very public. Thank you for reminding me, 5 stars

Yeah, second person usually doesn't do much for me, and I was worried for a second. But you delivered the story incredibly well.

My main highlight? That the story was hot and arousing. Short, to the point, and tense. There wasn't much blunt characterization, but you wrote it in such a way that I knew the characters, through their actions and emotions. Some of the time it was difficult to immerse myself into the story as the POV calls for, but your use of vivid description and tense emotion helped put me there.

Great story.

Very hot. What I'd call a quicky but a goody. 5 stars

Picturing him licking his load out of her stretched anus made me hard as steel. Excellent writing. I look forward to future posts. 5 stars.

Great adventure ! Anal is our favorite also . We did it in a city park at night . She wore a long dress , no panties . I wore a flight suit , no undies . We found an old tree with the trunk standing at about a 30 degree angle from the ground . I laid her face down on the tree trunk and lifted her dress and licked her sweet ass hole until it relaxed opening a little so I could insert my tongue in to her . After a few moments of tongue fucking her , I had a raging hard on , I then open a pack of lube and inserted two then three lubed fingers up her ready anus . Unzipping my suit , I then took my hard dick and slowly thrusted in to her willing butt until I was balls deep then held it there for a long moment so we both took a deep sigh of pleasure . Several minutes of slow steady in and out fucking , she began throbbing and clamping her anal sphinter around my cock and had a long orgasm with me cummings with her . The feeling was so intense that I felt like I had ejaculated all my bains into her hot rectum . We remained still with me all the way up her and then I slowly slid out of her slippery hole .

In the dim light I saw her with a gaping anus . As we slowly walked back to our parked car , I ran my hand between her soft legs and felt my warm cum running down them . That night of public anal sex was the beginning of other fun times we shared !

Love that he is deep in her ass in public and no one knows.

Not too much lead up to the story, but the plot was direct enough. I think many of us have tried similar things in relative pubic just for the thrill of it. Sorry that this author has gone dark for so long.