The next time you have an incest tale, get the brother to come home with them and get the husband and brother to give the wife some double penetration, with her waking up to find her brother's cock in her pussy and her husband's cock in her asshole.
i do like this story probably as i do exactly the same with my wife when i get her drunk.
But it was too short and you could have included a lot more detail, also as she was that drunk you could have allowed all the people you mention to do a lot more to her.
Also you seemed to have forgotten to take your wifes brother home
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Anonymous05/05/16
Raping is a crime.!
Raping an intoxicated woman by husband brother or bar attendant is still Rape and is a crime.
I think non-consent/reluctance might be a better category for this tale. There was the brother aspect but it seemed like kind of a side note.
I like the other posters idea about her waking up with her brother fucking her, though I think it would be better if the husband were only watching and having second thoughts.
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Anonymous07/29/16
keep working...keep trying..somewhere in there is a story...
....the kernel of erotica is elusive..write more.......when reading becomes deciphering much is lost...
English
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read better but try hard
Next time
The next time you have an incest tale, get the brother to come home with them and get the husband and brother to give the wife some double penetration, with her waking up to find her brother's cock in her pussy and her husband's cock in her asshole.
lol
Spell check, son!
too short
i do like this story probably as i do exactly the same with my wife when i get her drunk.
But it was too short and you could have included a lot more detail, also as she was that drunk you could have allowed all the people you mention to do a lot more to her.
Also you seemed to have forgotten to take your wifes brother home
Raping is a crime.!
Raping an intoxicated woman by husband brother or bar attendant is still Rape and is a crime.
Not Bad
I think non-consent/reluctance might be a better category for this tale. There was the brother aspect but it seemed like kind of a side note.
I like the other posters idea about her waking up with her brother fucking her, though I think it would be better if the husband were only watching and having second thoughts.
keep working...keep trying..somewhere in there is a story...
....the kernel of erotica is elusive..write more.......when reading becomes deciphering much is lost...
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