an excellent story-the contents are very romantic
hope you translate the other stories. many people like it ,im sure
the english is good ,really,there are only minor faults but they dont affect anyway
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Anonymous04/19/13
don't worry, your English is fine, and your heart's...
in the right place. You are a devotee of hot motherfucking, and that's what counts. There's nothing to equal a boy sticking his fine fat prick up his mother's mommy-hole and unloading his young balls up where he was once a little baby. And your hero is twice blessed. Not only does he get to shoot his creamy semen up his own mother's cunt, but--lookie here!--the brazen lad's fucked a baby up the same twat where he started out as a baby. Now son and mom and the product of their hot incestuous fuck live together happily, a perfect modern family.
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Anonymous09/08/13
Distraction
Yore speling is treble. The story wold not be halve bad if it wher not for the gramer.
Points for admitting English isn't your language, but I would think spellcheck would fix some of that. Unfortunately, your story is run of the mill. But hey, I doubt I could write a good story in another language either.
English
excellent
an excellent story-the contents are very romantic
hope you translate the other stories. many people like it ,im sure
the english is good ,really,there are only minor faults but they dont affect anyway
don't worry, your English is fine, and your heart's...
in the right place. You are a devotee of hot motherfucking, and that's what counts. There's nothing to equal a boy sticking his fine fat prick up his mother's mommy-hole and unloading his young balls up where he was once a little baby. And your hero is twice blessed. Not only does he get to shoot his creamy semen up his own mother's cunt, but--lookie here!--the brazen lad's fucked a baby up the same twat where he started out as a baby. Now son and mom and the product of their hot incestuous fuck live together happily, a perfect modern family.
Distraction
Yore speling is treble. The story wold not be halve bad if it wher not for the gramer.
Points for admitting English isn't your language, but I would think spellcheck would fix some of that. Unfortunately, your story is run of the mill. But hey, I doubt I could write a good story in another language either.
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