a weak story, a weak plot. to does not make sense. out of know where she lets go and becomes a slut so easily.. author you could do a hell of a lot better than that!!!
what married women has an affair after such a short flirt.
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Anonymous02/10/14
You're a two bit gutter slut! Your diseased cunt would be the last thing on earth that would turn me on. I like my health just the way it is!
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Anonymous02/10/14
Geez...
...I just don't understand the vile hatred from the first two anonymous posters. First of all, you guys realize this is fiction, right?
Second, would you have posted a single word if the writer were a man and he fucked a female coworker? Somehow I doubt it.
Let me guess....somewhere in your past, a woman hurt you. Maybe she dumped you, maybe she cheated on you. Well grow up. We ALL get hurt by others - men AND women. Stop being a frickin' crybaby. I guarantee you've hurt someone, too.
It's a shame the people who comment here can't separate fantasy from reality. For those of us who can, this was a hot story. It's so short, however, that's it like having a quickie. Not that there is anything wrong with that on occasion, but I would have preferred more of a build-up, and more character development.
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Anonymous02/10/14
Just another...
Slut for the recycle bin of marriages; divorce.
Seriously though, no real quantifiable build up to warrant someone to so easily throw away the integrity, trust, fidelity that accompanies a true Loving Wife in a successful functional marriage.
Hot Sex, but you really need to put a "Bitch Writer at Work" warning on this shit.
You will get a higher score from your fellow bitches and non-men that enjoy this cuck bullshit, and save the rest of us from wasting our time.
What would hubby think? Oh yeah, she doesn't care. Wonder if she'd care that he can now go get some of his own? If she doesn't care (and I'm assuming that in the broadest sense possible) it shouldn't matter. But it has to matter or else the excitement wouldn't be there, would it. If she didn't care about her husband the fact that she was blatantly abusing his trust in her would diminish the thrill. I am guessing this is based on someone's fantasy and the fact it's there should honestly worry that person's spouse/significant other. Hit sex scene? Not particularly. The fact that it's infidelity makes it worse. The real fact that she is propositioning her hubby's friend to make her "feel better" dropped it off the cliff for me. Nothing erotic here...
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Anonymous02/10/14
Well this is a train wreck
And seducing her husbands friend is the quickest way to the crash, followed by the divorce. The writing in this left a lot to be desired, the premise isn't very original or clever and by the end, I just didn't care because she was such a lousy character.
Must be tough being a self-righteous Anonymous Wanker and unable to get it up for a short, silly, but sexy story. You know, the reason most of us come here in the first place.
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Anonymous02/10/14
Adequate D cup
What the fuck is an adequate D cup? Perhaps crappy writers would be better off using litres.
eg "see the blond over there."
"Which one?"
"the one with the 5 litre jugs."
"Oh yeah, i like the one with the 3 litre set myself."
See how easy it can be?
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Anonymous02/10/14
Not quite: I am more puzzled by her actions than aroused.
And IF the man in question is really her husbands best friend, he would do the right thing and tell his friend that not only is his wife cheating on him...she's trying to seduce him as well. But that is only IF he is the best friend. If he succumbs to this lame seduction then he's not really a friend, is he?
The title seems 'off!' Sweetie doesn't sound like she needs or wants consoling! Now that she has 'scored' the executive mailboy (huh?) she is trying to score the reader as well. Sorry, but I'm happily married (that's my story and I'm sticking to it!)
What kind of operation has a private office for the 'executive mailguy?' And he gets to call workers upstairs? And they think he can discipline or fire them? AND THEN, the biggie ... what was he doing to the 'junior' mailboy that caused our Bull to 'lower' himself to deliver to the 'commoner' offices? Or did our Bull make up that excuse because he had a stiffie for our heroine/slut?
Woulda been much better if Sweetie had to have been seduced more creatively (and systematically) than was true here! Hubby must be proud!
If what you are seeking is a short, silly, stroke story. This was fluff
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Anonymous02/12/14
One hopes she gets AIDS and dies after her husband divorces her
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Anonymous02/13/14
I don't understand
I've never understood people who get on a porn literature site and then belittle the author for writing about a wife or husband who cheats. I mean come on it's a story not real life and if you don't want to read about it get off the site and find something else to do with your sad life
I could feel your heart beating ever so much quicker with each word you played for me. I love the style, short quick and to the point. A randy moment and the promise of more. Admitted cheater and willing and needing more cock. I'll look for you again my dear, dripping pussy and hard nips.
A nice little trip into office sex. Thanks. Maybe the negative comments are from people who don't understand what 'Extra Marital Sex' means in the LW category?
English
nothing here to comment about
a weak story, a weak plot. to does not make sense. out of know where she lets go and becomes a slut so easily.. author you could do a hell of a lot better than that!!!
what married women has an affair after such a short flirt.
You're a two bit gutter slut! Your diseased cunt would be the last thing on earth that would turn me on. I like my health just the way it is!
Geez...
...I just don't understand the vile hatred from the first two anonymous posters. First of all, you guys realize this is fiction, right?
Second, would you have posted a single word if the writer were a man and he fucked a female coworker? Somehow I doubt it.
Let me guess....somewhere in your past, a woman hurt you. Maybe she dumped you, maybe she cheated on you. Well grow up. We ALL get hurt by others - men AND women. Stop being a frickin' crybaby. I guarantee you've hurt someone, too.
Hot!
It's a shame the people who comment here can't separate fantasy from reality. For those of us who can, this was a hot story. It's so short, however, that's it like having a quickie. Not that there is anything wrong with that on occasion, but I would have preferred more of a build-up, and more character development.
Just another...
Slut for the recycle bin of marriages; divorce.
Seriously though, no real quantifiable build up to warrant someone to so easily throw away the integrity, trust, fidelity that accompanies a true Loving Wife in a successful functional marriage.
Hot Sex
Hot Sex, but you really need to put a "Bitch Writer at Work" warning on this shit.
You will get a higher score from your fellow bitches and non-men that enjoy this cuck bullshit, and save the rest of us from wasting our time.
Loved it!
Short, sweet and hot! Loved the sassy ending. 5*
Wow
What would hubby think? Oh yeah, she doesn't care. Wonder if she'd care that he can now go get some of his own? If she doesn't care (and I'm assuming that in the broadest sense possible) it shouldn't matter. But it has to matter or else the excitement wouldn't be there, would it. If she didn't care about her husband the fact that she was blatantly abusing his trust in her would diminish the thrill. I am guessing this is based on someone's fantasy and the fact it's there should honestly worry that person's spouse/significant other. Hit sex scene? Not particularly. The fact that it's infidelity makes it worse. The real fact that she is propositioning her hubby's friend to make her "feel better" dropped it off the cliff for me. Nothing erotic here...
Well this is a train wreck
And seducing her husbands friend is the quickest way to the crash, followed by the divorce. The writing in this left a lot to be desired, the premise isn't very original or clever and by the end, I just didn't care because she was such a lousy character.
Must be tough...
Must be tough being a self-righteous Anonymous Wanker and unable to get it up for a short, silly, but sexy story. You know, the reason most of us come here in the first place.
Adequate D cup
What the fuck is an adequate D cup? Perhaps crappy writers would be better off using litres.
eg "see the blond over there."
"Which one?"
"the one with the 5 litre jugs."
"Oh yeah, i like the one with the 3 litre set myself."
See how easy it can be?
Not quite: I am more puzzled by her actions than aroused.
And IF the man in question is really her husbands best friend, he would do the right thing and tell his friend that not only is his wife cheating on him...she's trying to seduce him as well. But that is only IF he is the best friend. If he succumbs to this lame seduction then he's not really a friend, is he?
Jeez
Can't a girl have a naughty fantasy without arousing all this male ire? You wouldn't really treat your hubby this way, would you?
Cute format
The title seems 'off!' Sweetie doesn't sound like she needs or wants consoling! Now that she has 'scored' the executive mailboy (huh?) she is trying to score the reader as well. Sorry, but I'm happily married (that's my story and I'm sticking to it!)
What kind of operation has a private office for the 'executive mailguy?' And he gets to call workers upstairs? And they think he can discipline or fire them? AND THEN, the biggie ... what was he doing to the 'junior' mailboy that caused our Bull to 'lower' himself to deliver to the 'commoner' offices? Or did our Bull make up that excuse because he had a stiffie for our heroine/slut?
Woulda been much better if Sweetie had to have been seduced more creatively (and systematically) than was true here! Hubby must be proud!
4*
OK
If what you are seeking is a short, silly, stroke story. This was fluff
One hopes she gets AIDS and dies after her husband divorces her
I don't understand
I've never understood people who get on a porn literature site and then belittle the author for writing about a wife or husband who cheats. I mean come on it's a story not real life and if you don't want to read about it get off the site and find something else to do with your sad life
Just Perfuck
I could feel your heart beating ever so much quicker with each word you played for me. I love the style, short quick and to the point. A randy moment and the promise of more. Admitted cheater and willing and needing more cock. I'll look for you again my dear, dripping pussy and hard nips.
Just well narrated Like scanda
Love the pace and the first and third person narrative. It helped he story. Hope you do more. Please......
Short and sweet
A nice little trip into office sex. Thanks. Maybe the negative comments are from people who don't understand what 'Extra Marital Sex' means in the LW category?
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