All Comments on 'Friends Ch. 01'

by FantasyMan021

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Keep it up

Your story line is good and the story would be much better if someone proofread your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice story

Quite a few friends have similar feelings and neither wants to make first move. It is good to take a chance and see how relationship progresses.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 10 years ago
Nice story........

Ch. 02...and more...please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
i meant 5 stars oops!

It was a great story now im gonna read the second

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